Chapter 01 Page 037

January 18th, 2019, 5:30 am

The biggest smooch from the biggest girlfriend!
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Neon Noble, January 18th, 2019, 5:30 am     Reply

At last!!

This took way too long to get to you! I had hoped for enough time a week or two ago, but that just didn't happen. But here we are! I hope this was worth the wait.

Advertisement, July 22nd, 2019, 10:38 pm     Reply

Neon Noble, January 21st, 2019, 8:56 pm     Reply

@Sulferon: I'm sorry you feel that way, but my characters were written this way from the start. I wasn't trying to make it any more special than a cute moment between partners. If a colorful background for a cute moment of levity is too much for you, then I really don't know what to tell you.

I've had this story cooking for a number of years and this moment was always part of it.

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Doomsby, January 21st, 2019, 1:15 pm     Reply

Hoo lordy, someone is smi~tten!
Ya know, I don't think I've seen someone get kissed on top of the muzzle before. Maybe I just haven't surfed enough furry galleries. *Shrug*

Sulferon (Guest), January 22nd, 2019, 1:53 am     Reply

@Neon Noble: I think I overreacted. I'll delete that comment.

Badr Bally (Guest), January 22nd, 2019, 11:46 pm     Reply

Wait, Zareth's female?

..... All this time I was reading her dialogue with a manly voice in mind.

Neon Noble, January 23rd, 2019, 2:52 am     Reply

@Badr Bally : Ahahaha! Her armor doesn't very much give away her figure, so I don't blame you for thinking that!

Her voice is a little deep in my mind, too, so I wouldn't say you're too far off!

WolfenReader (Guest), January 24th, 2019, 4:34 am     Reply

@Neon Noble: I'd figured Zareth was female (can't recall now what first gave me that impression, maybe body language? But I notice now that she has the same eyelash-points as Laska), and from how Laska reacted to her I'd figured they were at least acquainted (and probably good friends), but this is much cuter! I especially love that muzzle-top kiss! I (like Doomsby) don't think I'd seen such a kiss before and it's really sweet!

Mvilu Uatusun (Guest), February 16th, 2019, 12:42 pm     Reply

LOL. Well, I was close. (I had originally planned on saying he should say, "Ow" instead of ouch. LOL.)

Mvilu Uatusun (Guest), February 16th, 2019, 12:47 pm     Reply

Not me
@Badr Bally : Actually, (having already read this page before reading the previous pages) I thought Laska was male.

Neon Noble, February 16th, 2019, 2:35 pm     Reply

@Mvilu Uatusun: After reading the other pages it's much easier to tell, especially with people referring to her.

Sometimes people aren't super feminine or masculine!

Mvilu Uatusun (Guest), February 18th, 2019, 3:38 pm     Reply

@Neon Noble: That's true. Sometimes, a masculine looking female is quite attractive. I guess that her acting masculine is what confused me. But, as a writer, I should have realized that a lot of times, things aren't what they seem.

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