Chapter 01 Page 048

June 7th, 2019, 5:30 am

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Neon Noble, June 7th, 2019, 5:30 am     Reply

And Thus, Chapter 1 Closes!

Wow! That's quite a secret, Laska! The arms, that is. This society is very flexible and tolerant of the genders of its people, how varied they may be.

What kind of magic runes power those metal arms...?

There will be an end page coming up soon (at a later date to prevent confusion) but this officially marks the end of the chapter!

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Doomsby, June 7th, 2019, 4:43 pm     Reply


Oh my! So I was half right then? She's a cyborg instead of the full robot like I suggested, which does explain the flaws that I had with full robot. Hmm hmm hmm. This does bring up more questions that'll have to be on the watch for clues for.

Also congrats on completing the chapter! :D

BudgieGryphon, June 7th, 2019, 8:33 pm     Reply


That’s really cool. Cyborg doggo!

Neon Noble, June 7th, 2019, 10:18 pm     Reply


@Doomsby: "Cyborg" isn't quite the term I'd use, personally, but that's for another time!

I loved that you sussed out part of the truth earlier, but I had to keep quiet!

orgostevani, June 7th, 2019, 11:58 pm     Reply


Well, I was seriously not expecting prosthetic arms in the slightest as her secret.

Troy (Guest), June 8th, 2019, 11:03 am     Reply

Yep
That would definitely explain the increased strength.......

LapisHusky (Guest), June 10th, 2019, 1:37 am     Reply


Those arms reminds me of every cyberpunk movie/video game. Laska would fit perfectly in cyberpunk 2077 with those arms. But she would stick out like a sore thumb because everyone is human or have human like features, since she's a jakkel person. And she would have a huge case of culture shock and have to learn how to use our technology if she ends up being stuck here. (Whether she appears in our world here and now or cyberpunk 2077 world). But I have a feeling that she'll adapt well if that's here story. Please let there be a cool non-cannon story from the author!

LapisHusky (Guest), June 10th, 2019, 1:42 am     Reply


About Laska being in our world here and now or her being in either our sci-fi future world or a another sci-fi world that is not our world.

Iceburgh69, June 15th, 2019, 1:01 am     Reply


@LapisHusky: Assuming that Cyberpunk 2077 is based on the tabletop game Cyberpunk 2020, she probably wouldn't stick out as much as you might think, since animal-mods exist.

As for culture shock, yeah, that's a thing that she'd experience without any doubt whatsoever.

LapisHusky (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 11:57 pm     Reply


@Iceburgh69: I did not know that, the only thing that I know about Cyberpunk 2077 is the trailers for the video game. Also I was shocked and amazed that Keanu Reeves (aka Neo from the Matrix, I absolutely love that movie) was in it. (Also remember that office lobby from the first movie, now imagine FØB My Songs Know What You Did In The Dark played in those scenes). So far the game looks promising and shows everything that cyberpunk is, now all we need is a Tron easter egg in the game, then it would be absolutely complete (well for me anyways).

Iceburgh69, June 24th, 2019, 2:03 am     Reply


@LapisHusky: I'm not sure which book the mods'd be in, but I ended up with a Tigerman mod at one point in the tabletop game. Now, Cyberpunk 2077 may be a different animal (pun intended), I'm not certain, and the mods aren't in the main book, so don't take what I'd said too seriously.

LapisHusky, June 27th, 2019, 4:49 pm     Reply


Ok.

orgostevani, October 12th, 2019, 11:50 pm     Reply


Hey, I'm popping in to see how things are for you.

Neon Noble, October 13th, 2019, 12:11 am     Reply


@orgostevani: Hi! Things are up and down, as usual. Been trying to push myself to be ready for releasing pages of Chapter 2 to the public, but I'm behind on my personal deadlines. I'm still kicking, I promise! Thanks for checking in~

orgostevani, October 16th, 2019, 1:49 pm     Reply


No problem.

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